Very beautiful drawing and conception! Great and clean lineart...will like to see it in color.

Lol, me and aki similar?!? I'm not sure I even want to know in what possible way!!
Anyhows I'm glad you took out the wings and scary insect look she had going on for a short while. Love her face.. she has something calm and warm about her. I'm not sure I'm getting the link between the pic and the 85th birthday of the robot... or is it sectretly your 85th birthday? Are all robots stupid? is samus considered a robot when she's in her suit? Can A.I. create it's own emotion? If so should they be considered humans? what makes a human a human?

This one really shows off the strength of that line of yours. The whole piece is really moving. I was looking through your works in progress and i kind of liked it with the floating flowers but maybe with a couple more making their way around the piece. Great work.

On a side note I was thinking this one must have come pretty easy because I didn’t see any use of stimulates or sedatives. But then I saw it the donkey tranquilizers. i didn’t realizes the market was still there for donkey tranqs. They must be making a come back.

Another great work
+10

cool style i like it!
nice lines

Very nice work, clean line work.
I think it would look great in color, or even with some shading maybe.
It took me a while to see that her left hand is behind her back, at first I thought it was the insects head (she looked like a pirate ).
Maybe you can add some contrast between the lady in the drawing and all that is behind her?

great!

now why did you have to put her hand over her breast?

Nice
But think the Background is a bit to busy because of that the main character is a bit merging with the background. I think you can you can lower the opacity of the background layer to bring more focus on the main character.
cherz..

like it a lot....

hey home skillet...I really like the 8th WIP. The final is great, but the compo in the 8th one is a bit more interesting IMO...keep pushing that sweet style!

wow this changed alot since the first draft you showed me, superb stupendous, wonder bunny, +10

great work!

Beautiful lines and shapes!...top marks!
Carlos

 Fyralath - thanks but youll see colour from someone else really. i spend so much time on drawing that colouring just seems to be overdraining. i might just one day.
 Slither-Astray o.O
 PJClapp - actually matt, i've noticed that a lot of kids are into kadamine nowadays.
 cupcake ,  Daykan,  lolita ,  MaiteGoitia and  Madanapale - thanks
 Valera and  cgmonkey - you two are absolutely right on this one. i'll fix it soon. i just came back from out of town.
 deankuhta you know when you work on something for a while and youre tired of looking at it and know its just got to end. it just sort of felt that way. i deleted a lot of bg elements because i didnt want to make the entire scene confusing.
 seeThrou - thanks aaron.
 Cigaro - because i wanted to protect your young mind from such things.

Good drawing

very nice! i wanna color it, ha!

Nice and clean! The flow is beautiful! Heehee, off topic but -- what kind of eraser do you use?

good work, i like it, well composed, with a free wheeling spirit to it...one crit, the hand over the breast, the wrist seems...off slightly, the angle is just strange there, i had to dig around the image a lot to come up with that crit though, i just hate to leave short "nice image" comments.

  Aldor - thanks
 Hemlawk86 - sure go ahead
 klyph - i use Alias Sketchbook for my drawings and i use the basic hard eraser that comes with it. in real life i use a simple faber castell or a kneaded one depending on the situation. i also swing between a 3h pencil and a 4-6b for finishing.
 PeterGrave5 - oh yeah the hand totally blows. im still trying to perfect them. thanks for the critique

Seems like Caption Planet's team member(Ive forgotten her name).....not bad at all )

wicked style...very art nouveau. I thought I had commented on this! Oh well lovely lines.

I think your drawings are getting better and better.
I really love the compositions you recently thought up for them, and also the poses look great

@ the last 20 "members" above me, also called Asiya: Hun, I'd suggest you to at least decide which account you wanna keep cause having more than one simultaneously definatly violates the rules and you could get a permamnent IP ban for that. XD

test 123...

its dead jim....

note: the disruptive comments were removed and the accounts responsible for them blocked.

thanks martin

love the line style.

Nice job on the composition--good balance overall.

It took me a couple of glances to figure out where the figure stopped and the weird little background thing started. Maybe a slightly darker, or more profusion of, lines around the figure would split them apart. I also agree that this worked better with some smaller interest points, like the floating flowers, which added some variety to the shapes.

The body itself has very nice lines and a great sense of balance. The ornamental wrinkles in the dress are really complimenting that feeling of balance and motion in the out-thrust hip and counterbalanced shoulder, arm and head.

That hand over the breast is bad wrong, though. There's no contour line breaking the forearm from the hand, so where the hand would be dropping back to cover the breast, it actually appears as if the arm is somewhat straight. And the fingers look like she may have had a tangle with some heavy machinery.

This is a really nice piece, though. I enjoy your work

6/9

HEY I though I commenten on this one! Oops!
I like her face alot. But her hand seems a little fatty. He hair and the lines behind are really nicely done Bakatron. Also some nice mystery involved with trying to figure out if she is half naked on the right

See review section.

wow: a review

to hell with a ferrari enzo man. i got my first review

thanks j.

sexy!